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ILO Projects - The 5 Components Animations

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  1. Eric BrancoSeptember 22, 2015 at 5:46 PM

    Critique 1.
    I watched this infographic animation it’s nice and impressive to watch. I enjoyed the pace, and audio syncing. Makes me feel that the character audio belong to her.
    What I’d change to make it better:

    1. There’s too much movements of the characters hands and body, which are becoming distraction. Add moments few frame during the beginning of sentence, then replace with pose in the middle of sentence and in the end you can add slight movements or not depending whether the audio is finishing to a calm or question/surprise. This is how we normally speak
    2. Try to replace the character sliding from side to side with the actual camera movements. Current It seems like the camera is stationary just the character and texts have motions.
    3. The character appears in the midle for the most part of the add, at times she tends to block the logo. Have her on side angle or we call it ( rule of third ->3rd)

    4. Add variation of camera angles: Extreme shot-ES, Close shot-CS ,wide shot-WS, Medium Shot- MS.
    5. Limit image slide show transition in/out animation to 1 or 2 style.
    6. The beginning and end, I’d like to see fade in the beginning and fade out to black in the end. Currant the beginning of the add has a pop or static and the end has fade out of the background but the character stays on the screen.
    7. Documentation is missing, you have not mentioned your work flow in this post. If you don’t do this you lose ownership of your own project (Someone may think may be the work is not yours.) remember to be proud and describe your work.
    These are the things we expect to see on your next repost if possible. Overall, great work I know it has taken you great amount of time during creation, keep up good work and continue to improve it, u will master the motion graphic skills.

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  2. UnknownOctober 9, 2015 at 4:58 AM

    hey kaka sorry kwa kuchelewa kukujibu.. by the way nilitumia Crayztalk Animator Pro na After Effects for Compositing na pia kwa character animation ndo nikatumia Crayztalk Animator Pro. Pia nilifanya for fun sababu walitaka tuu izo info tuu... lakin mm nikaweka na character.


    ASANTE KAKAB KWA MAONI YAKO

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